Dream Deep

... And who could say no to an impish alcove? ^_~ As for the game of alternating posts, it is technically my turn - I've got to get on that. ...

This moved right along, Gyr and it brought out new aspects of both Moncreif and Danteel - then ending was cruelly devised, there should be a law against leaving readers ...

:) I one had an assignement to write for French... Eh, terrible, terrible... Copied everything from my friend... :razz: For shame, Elein. ^_^

Heh, I've never been to Poland, but having lived in the United States all my life, I'm starting to think I would rather be 'stuck' there. ;) I write predominantly ...

Oh, I liked it a lot, Mandax. Involves a piano, what's not to like? ^_^ In fact, that only parts where I thought it lacked were the very first and ...

Good job, Trident, on this one as well. I got a good sense of this place and of your hermit. But there is one thing you might want to look ...

Thank you all, so much - encouragement, is after all, one half of making things possible; you have to believe they can work before anything. ^_~ And it would appear ...

*sits in the back, sharpening haikus* Hehe... Inscription, Wiggy, Inscription. However do you intend me to finish the Chair when I can't write for distaction, wanting to know what happens ...

This is a nice forum idea, Nate, thanks. ^_^ Ah well... I've been procrastinating terribly with the main project at the moment. The main project, of course, being The Chair ...

*must.... have... more... 'In Thrall....* *dies*

Safe? As in, you can walk down them and not have a close and friendly meeting with either a bullet or someone's fist? Hah, is that a trick question? My, ...

Upton Sinclair's The Jungle , yet - though it's not half bad, I don't know why Pros complained so much over it. ... And The Demon and Other Poems by ...

You can curse the living daylights out of someone, too? I thought that was just for beating... God knows I'm well-enough acquainted with that. And not on the right side ...

( continued from previous... ) -- Their entrance into the kitchens and their meeting with the cook is well-written, good job there. ^_^ The Nagai found that he could now ...

For being, as you say, a relatively un-polished piece, this one reads much better than its predecessor on the first run through. This one won't need near as much attention ...